Chipped-Teacup
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I'm procrastinating by playing AC (as per usual), sooooo if anyone wants their DA checking out, I'll give it a look over and a mini review 
Dream Address Mini Reviews!
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Mega_Cabbage
Meh
I would like a review please. DA in sig.
Chipped-Teacup
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I really liked the little presents and outfit you left out, was a nice start to the visit. The theme you have going on too is niceeee, like naturey yet somehow modern
. The rooms in the houses too were really well decorated, each room had character! The only thing I'd say is I found the flower placement a bit sporadic when it wasn't near villager houses. Great town though, works well 
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You have one bright path! The colours of your flowers all together went well with the vibrance of your town
. I really liked the top left area, with the tiles and the clovers and the bushes, was very uniform! The switch in path surprised me though, and I didn't feel the neutral path went as well as the pink and orange one, but that's just personal preference! Nicely done, keep going with it - - - Post Merge - - -
Wowww, when I woke up I was immediately thinking it'd be a great town. And I wasn't wrong! The path was a fantastic base for your town- everything fitted together nicely pretty much because of it. The area with the Eiffel Tower was probably my favourite, never seen the bushes aligned like that near a PWP
. I would like to see some presents laid out, although I do understand why you don't, as there isn't much room for them! Really lovely town overall 
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
Okay, so I really like your town map- I'm gonna assume you had to reset a lot to get it that nice XD. The top half of your town is quite nice too, like with all the matching flowers together and all. However, your path really irks me, like it's a bit bland for me, could use a border on it. Not a bad town at all though, keep working on it
MatchaMoonlight
We All Scream
I would love it if you would check out mine! DA in siggy.
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
I really like the little park area you have, I think that's a neat idea. The tulips near the Windmill and Lighthouse are so gorgeous too, that's probably my favourite area
. Like the commitment to the fairytale too! The path you used does contrast oddly with the vibrant flowers though, so I'd like to see how a more colourful path would look personal preference though! Nice overall, lot of potential 
I'd love it if you could check out mine! I've recently finished (almost) everything and I'd like some feedback :3 The DA is either in my sig or on my profile.
Currently, Whitney's house is still in the middle of the road and ruined a little bench-area I had, but she's just refusing to move out... just imagine what it looks like otherwise ;w; (Also please don't walk on my beach of shame)
Currently, Whitney's house is still in the middle of the road and ruined a little bench-area I had, but she's just refusing to move out... just imagine what it looks like otherwise ;w; (Also please don't walk on my beach of shame)
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
I'd love to get a review on mine please
The path you have is really cute, it definitely goes nicely with the whole nature theme. The little area around Bunnie's house is nice, like how the flowers match the exterior
. I love your town map too, it's the perfect map! There's a lot of empty space around the second half, which you could fill with flowers and the such. Plus, your town is too colourful to have saved with rain, would be nice to see it with the sunshine . Quite pretty town overall!- - - Post Merge - - -
I like how you've lined the path fairly consistently, and how all the little colour flowers match the areas
loving the area near Cheri's house (of course I'm a little bias there as I have her too XD). The criss cross bit with the bushes and the roses near the cafe is really interesting, I like that! Improvement wise, with the area near Whitney's (I can see how her house was annoying XD), I'd use apple or cherry trees over pear trees, so they match the flowers more, and same as the last review, a fair few gaps in the landscape that have lots of potential! Keep going with it, looks good so far menrfrommagmar
Awww yiss
I would really like a review of my DA! It's still a WIP though so go easy on me! 
4900-5287-5199
4900-5287-5199
MissLily123
Oh, the Nostalgia.
I'd love for you to visit! 5600-4095-2448
Please don't mind all of the flowers ^.^
Please don't mind all of the flowers ^.^
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
I like the flowers around the edges of the ponds that are all blue and white, they're so pretty . The whole orange area around then cafe is cool, I've never seen the gold roses entwined with the orange ones like that, looks good! I like the path, but in places the path needs a border (e.g. around flower beds), otherwise it loses the effect. Your town does have a lot of things going for it, do send it me to check out again once it's done
(Hope that wasn't too harsh XD)
(This one was for Menrfromagmar, forgot to quote haha)
. The whole orange area around then cafe is cool, I've never seen the gold roses entwined with the orange ones like that, looks good! I like the path, but in places the path needs a border (e.g. around flower beds), otherwise it loses the effect. Your town does have a lot of things going for it, do send it me to check out again once it's done (Hope that wasn't too harsh XD)
(This one was for Menrfromagmar, forgot to quote haha)
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menrfrommagmar
Awww yiss
I like the flowers around the edges of the ponds that are all blue and white, they're so pretty
(Hope that wasn't too harsh XD)
(This one was for Menrfromagmar, forgot to quote haha)
I'm still working on the path. It's more difficult than I thought it would be. xD Thank you so much for the review!
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
Done
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They are a pain, but a worthy pain at that XD you're welcome
Chipped-Teacup
Senior Member
The area near the zen bench was really nice, very vibrant
. Your house interior is lovely too, the spa/bathroom area is pretty! I'd maybe form the flowers into a border for a path? With a few bushes or stumps? I felt bad having to tread on them to get where I wanted to xD. I'd also lay out a few more items, was nice having the wand . Overall nice town with potential, keep at it!- - - Post Merge - - -
I'm just critiquing what I saw, I don't need you to defend yourself
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