Come review some dreams

[Yukari Yakumo]

as it says, lets review some dreams.
post your da here and make a request.
dream of a town and write your review.

 

[MatchaMoonlight]

If anyone would like to review my town, my DA is in my siggy.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Amyville

Town:
Likes:
- dark and stormy
- pokeball path
- color coordinated flowers
- path going through the flower arch
- park area
- Pierce!! What are you doing here?! X)
- lighthouse/windmill area
- Tom and Klaus' graves
- Bonbon!! You too?! XD

Dislikes:
- skinny path to police station
- area around town hall feels unfinished
- tulip topiary feels out of place
- lots of unused areas
- lone bushes feel weird

Amy's House:
Likes:
- spooky mushroom forest'
- ice room
- sweet tooth
- ruby furniture with Apollo as an accent? Hunh. :|
- spooky! XO
- pretty as a princess

Dislikes:
- seems like there's some empty spaces that need filling

Suggestions:
- widen path going to police station
- spruce up town hall area
- move the stained glass in Amy's ice room to over the bed

Final Thoughts: nice, but it feels underdeveloped. keep improving. you have some good ideas that just need some fleshing out.
I have a feeling you'd love my town.

Rating: 3/5

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

I would like a review.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Nectere

Town:
Likes:
- woo. the hour bells went off just as I got up.
- cherry blossoms!
- night time
- nice paths
- zen garden
- hot springs
- tower area
- pink lillies with white violets is nice(might try it myself now)
- illuminated arches/trees
- path to Jillian's house
- just everything. it's like one giant, rich-person's park

Dislikes:
- path doesn't quite fit the hot spring
- flower overload

Jillian's House:
Likes:
- Main: nice lobby/restuarant
- Right: wow. a game lock in
- Back: interesting... office? not quite sure how I feel about it
- Left: bathroom. rich bathroom.
- Basement: command center?
- 2nd floor: temple?

Dislikes:
- Back: feels odd.

Suggestions:
- try a more natural path around the hot spring
- add a master sword or triforce on second floor
- maybe try different carpet or wallpaper in backroom
- maybe try reducing the number of flowers. less can be more.
- do a little bit more with the bus stop

Final Thoughts: very nice. an obviously large amount of time and effort.
I'm pretty sure you'd also like my town.

Rating: 5/5

 

[MatchaMoonlight]

Amyville

Town:
Likes:
- dark and stormy
- pokeball path
- color coordinated flowers
- path going through the flower arch
- park area
- Pierce!! What are you doing here?! X)
- lighthouse/windmill area
- Tom and Klaus' graves
- Bonbon!! You too?! XD

Dislikes:
- skinny path to police station
- area around town hall feels unfinished
- tulip topiary feels out of place
- lots of unused areas
- lone bushes feel weird

Amy's House:
Likes:
- spooky mushroom forest'
- ice room
- sweet tooth
- ruby furniture with Apollo as an accent? Hunh. :|
- spooky! XO
- pretty as a princess

Dislikes:
- seems like there's some empty spaces that need filling

Suggestions:
- widen path going to police station
- spruce up town hall area
- move the stained glass in Amy's ice room to over the bed

Final Thoughts: nice, but it feels underdeveloped. keep improving. you have some good ideas that just need some fleshing out.
I have a feeling you'd love my town.

Rating: 3/5

Thanks so much for your detailed review! I will definitely check out your town when I get a chance.

 

[MatchaMoonlight]

I just finished visiting your DA. I had a lot of fun looking around. I liked the fact that it was raining. Not a lot of DAs have rain. It was nice to see some familiar faces (Bonbon and Pierce), as well as some Touhou characters. I adored Alice's basement and the room in Yukari's house with all the kokeshi dolls. I also liked how you planted the flower arch in front of Chrissy's house. That looked really cute.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I have three in my sig. You could choose one. Thanks so much.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

On getting there, I realize I've been to JOY before, so I'll confine myself to noting some things I don't remember.

Cinderella's House:
-Love the gyroid band.
-The katana in the basement feels out of place. Maybe replace with a Master Sword?
Annie's House:
-What is that plate on the table in the main room?
Santa's House:
-love the modified alpine furniture
-...why Spring Blossoms?

Otherwise, I still love it.

 

[awesomeelle2001]

If anyone would like to review my town? My DC is on the side. But just in case it's...7500-2492-4239! My town is more developed now and I will be updating it soon! The pathway is a bit crappy too...

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Thanks for visiting Joy. Again.lol. And thanks for the nice review.

 

[Psicat]

I recently made some changes to my town. So, I would love some feedback if anyone would like to review my town. My DA is in my signature.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

London
Likes
-nice. a nice quiet park-like town
Dislikes
- a little plain. there aren't really any WOW moments or features. Most of the houses are still undeveloped.

I think you have an idea of where you want to go. Just need a little spark to get it really going.

Rating: 3/5