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snowblizzard24
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username: snowblizzard24
mayor name: Leighann
dream address: 4100-3389-3770
town name: Starmie
what you want me to review: ways to improve and PWPs
I'm still in the process of remodeling it after the last review I had and just waiting for a good sky to save it on, but any critque as of now would be very much appreciated!
mayor name: Leighann
dream address: 4100-3389-3770
town name: Starmie
what you want me to review: ways to improve and PWPs
I'm still in the process of remodeling it after the last review I had and just waiting for a good sky to save it on, but any critque as of now would be very much appreciated!
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username: snowblizzard24
mayor name: Leighann
dream address: 4100-3389-3770
town name: Starmie
what you want me to review: anything and everything
I'm still in the process of remodeling it after the last review I had and just waiting for a good sky to save it on, but any critque as of now would be very much appreciated!
please read the second paragraph.....
@Hanaberas: thanks for the bump heh
username: Ankhes
mayor name: Laura
dream address: (please write it out even if it's under your avatar!!) 4900-4741-9599
town name: Wolf
what you want me to review: Path I am using, how to use it, (does that count as one thing? ) and PWP's for a future Fairy-Tale (or older-looking) town. I really stink at Town Planning...
mayor name: Laura
dream address: (please write it out even if it's under your avatar!!) 4900-4741-9599
town name: Wolf
what you want me to review: Path I am using, how to use it, (does that count as one thing?
) and PWP's for a future Fairy-Tale (or older-looking) town. I really stink at Town Planning...I'd be grateful for a review please!
Boorah
Mayor Derek
DA: 4800-4397-4266
Town of Mythic
Theme (Modern/Forest? or something ) and general ways to improve. Also if you could check out Lazarus and Liara's houses! I'm happiest with Derek's house but the other two are more on point with the theme and need the most polish.
Thanks!
General Theme:
- wow your town's super organized and I love all the flower combos!! esp the red and purple
- fairytale PWPs seem a bit random/don't really match the feel of your town imo?
- not sure if the grey path was the best choice? most of your town is pretty foresty, I think a brown/more natural looking path would work better, esp on the bottom half of your town
Liara's House:
- main room looks super cozy and the choice of music works really well!! (what song is that btw? O: )
- the dresser in the middle of the room seems to be in kind of a awkward position? Same with the thing behind it that you sit on and see in doctor's offices (lmao sorry forgot what they're called), I'm not sure why that's there lol
- don't really have any suggestions for the right room, it looks like a great outdoorsy camping scene!!
- back room: not really fond of the wallpaper;; if you don't like the sweets one there's a lot of nice QR wallpapers that look good with the sweets set!
- maybe get rid of the bed and make it entirely a sweets cafe? given that there seems to be a place to buy sweets and whatnot the bed seems kind of random
- in terms of other items you could use, you could try and use the donut stools customized with the donut designs! they look really good with the sweets stuff imo
- left room: floor + the items looks a bit busy imo, maybe use the forest floor or the forest wall instead?
- not really sure if there was a theme for this room? some of the items (i.e. deer scare and the clothes rack) seem a bit random imo
- I noticed you had a gnome, maybe go with that and add more gnomes to make the room a outdoorsy hangout for the gnomes?
- upstairs: stereo doesn't really fit, but I think it's really hard to find a stereo that fits the ice set so idk what to suggest as a alternative;; you could always get rid of the stereo and use music boxes that Cyrus makes for you?
- maybe add more aurora screens as dividers to separate the front area, which reminds me of a living room, from the back that looks like a bedroom?
- basement: really pretty underwater hotel?
- you could throw some seashells you find on the beach around on the ground to make it look more ocean-like
Lazarus' House:
honestly I can't think of many improvements because I think this house was really creative and done really well!!
I esp love the movie theatre and gym/fitness room, I've never seen those before you did both really well!!
- only thing I would change would be to maybe use a darker wallpaper for the movie room since it's usually dark when we watch movies?
- upstairs: maybe use darker lighting?
- also I think it'd be nicer if the box sofas were black!
- more gorgeous things would look nice as well imo
I checked out Derek's house too and it's as amazing as the other two
overall great job, your town's def one of the best I've seen!
whaat why? O:
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username: Vizionari
mayor name: Ai
dream address: (please write it out even if it's under your avatar!!) 4200-4401-7842
town name: Tenshi
what you want me to review: villagers in my town and PWP placement
Also keep in mind I got a bunch of PWP suggestions this week so I might do an update soon
first off, woa your sky is gorgeous O: I've never seen it like that in my game haha
Villagers:
- super cute villagers!!
- noticed you have a looot more girls than guys lol... not sure if you wanna eventually get more male villagers?
- i don't really know who to suggest? you're missing a jock, & smug I think, hamlet & lopez are both pretty cute and I think they'd look nice in your town if you wanted to get those personalities eventually imo
PWP Placement:
- not sure on how I feel about the flower arc and outdoor bath? and I think it'd be nice if you surrounded it with pine trees and maybe other zen PWPs
- more zen PWPs overall by your bamboos would be nice.
- water fountain in a bit of a random position?
- it'd be nice if you added more natural PWPs by your campsite, or even like tree stumps or something
Vizionari
still not giving up
What? I have a jock in my town, and his name is Hamlet...
Yeah, I was thinking about getting about getting a cranky, but I don't want to let any of my villagers go right now... ^^"
I'm definitely going to add more to the campsite, and I want to have zen PWPs in my town, but unfortunately I don't have any suggested and I'm close to my PWP limit ;'(
Thanks for the review
What? I have a jock in my town, and his name is Hamlet...
Yeah, I was thinking about getting about getting a cranky, but I don't want to let any of my villagers go right now... ^^"
I'm definitely going to add more to the campsite, and I want to have zen PWPs in my town, but unfortunately I don't have any suggested and I'm close to my PWP limit ;'(
Thanks for the review
omg oop I confused hamlet with hamphrey LOL
I forgot, do you have a cranky atm...? since they're the ones that suggest the zen PWPs sooo
yea when I hit the PWP limit I got rid of most of my light posts and what not, since those are only one space big so I don't think they're that necessary;;
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aw hehe I'm sure your town is fine!!
You're sweet to say so!
But wait until you see it...man, I should update because I have 2 different villagers in 2 different places now, but it probably doesn't matter. I just plain need some advice! I really really really stink at organising. But at least I "dreamed" it while it was raining! So that part is good.Oh, I'm sorry! I am derailing. I'll wait for your review.
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snowblizzard24
Senior Member
Ehh, sorry!
I just meant whatever you want to review, but I guess umm... just any ways to improve my town like paths and pwp?
AppleBitterCrumble
TBT Hoarder
username: AppleBitterCrumble
mayor name: Primrose
dream address: Its in my signature and in my avatar
town name: Abstract
what you want me to review: My mayors house, and landscaping
mayor name: Primrose
dream address: Its in my signature and in my avatar
town name: Abstract
what you want me to review: My mayors house, and landscaping
TheGreatBrain
Senior Member
I'm confused.I thought i did use the form.lol.I gave all the info you asked for.
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Please tell me what i'm missing.I reread your first post and i posted user name, mayor name, dream code, town name, and what i would most like to be reviewed.Thanks.
chiheerios
chrom on and slam
username: chiheerios
mayor name: april
dream address: 4200-4665-2769
town name: cerezo
what you want me to review: General improvement/my house (the biggest one!)
mayor name: april
dream address: 4200-4665-2769
town name: cerezo
what you want me to review: General improvement/my house (the biggest one!)
