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I feel like this doesn't work very well as a synopsis. This would probably work better as the prologue or something. I don't know anything about the story from reading this. All I know is that the narrator sounds incredibly depressed and I would feel like this is just gonna be a book about someone and how much they hate their life.
 
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I would read it. The last sentence sounds interesting to me, makes me want to find out why/how they're all lies

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I feel like this doesn't work very well as a synopsis. This would probably work better as the prologue or something. I don't know anything about the story from reading this. All I know is that the narrator sounds incredibly depressed and I would feel like this is just gonna be a book about someone and how much they hate their life.

That's true, it would probably work better as a prologue instead of being on the back of a book
 
The content is relatable but overall seems pretty basic
 
I agree with Bowie, they seem like they'd fit as the opening of a prologue or first chapter rather than work as a synopsis :)
 
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