I just updated my town for spring and would love some visitors to head over and check it out/let me know if I could make it better in any way! My dream address is 5C00-01ED-B896.
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Feel free to comment on my town, would love to get feedback.
Hi,
I'll have a look later.
Sorry I was logged in as my brother again... (I.e. Asutoro is my brother and I posted as him...)
I just visited your town and I LOVE your paths, they're so fancy!
I really like the amount of PWP's you have and how the character houses are themed, it's like a proper town!!!
If you want you can check out my dream, the address is in my signature!
Thanks!
really nice town. i think your pear trees suit it as well however i would also add oranges to give it more of a variety and to also go with your path's theme. your pattern of flowers are a good choice and they are placed nicely however it needs a lot of work. if you want to put flowers around your path and you'll probably need a lot of them, the more types of white and yellow flowers the better. you could also experiment better and diverse combinations with them + it would be easier to finish.
there are still a lot of trees scattered around randomly on the bottom of your map, there is no path there either. i'm guessing this is just unfinished but i really do like how you've placed your fountain and how you've designed around it.
i'd also like to point out that your villagers are a good choice, most of them are in a similar colour theme but nevertheless it's good to have others that stand out.
library:
i was hoping you'd order your bookshelves and you have which is great. however, i would have less of them and add more space for tables and chairs to give it more of a cozy feeling than a cramped one. it is a gooood design for a library though
william's:
my favourite house. i love the first room, it's very colourful and i love the messiness of it. it suits what you're going for i believe. your room to the left is also well done, the furniture is greatly placed and overall the room is bright.
i like how you used the sweets furniture for your kitchen. i think that's clever and you've managed to pull it off. the only thing i'm concerned with is the ice cream freezer thingy. i think it's out of place and should be removed but that's just my opinion.
you've got a lot of nice food in your kitchen and although they're only desserts they blend in with your sweet furniture.
there's not much furniture in your room to the right but i do like how it's plain and simple. the bathroom is lovely and i like how it's designed symmetrically, i was concerned that you wouldn't have a bigger approach to a realistic house so i was relieved when i saw your bathroom. i personally like the more realistic houses.
the upstairs room is gorgeous and has a cute feeling to it however i would have had this in the basement and the bathroom upstairs. it just makes more sense to me
school:
kind of plain but it's fine, it's very easy to tell that it's a school. i would add a lunch room and a playground.
7-11:
a nice little shop, everything is placed nicely though i would have it bigger and make it more colourful.
so a lot of your flowers are out of place and it's not easy to tell where to go at some points since there's no path to lead me. when i go closer to the train station though it gets much more developed and neater, i like how you've put money trees and pears together. they are a nice combination
i have no issues with where you've placed your PWP's, they are all a good choice and they're easy to design around.
so yes, i like your town but it's very underdeveloped. i think it'll look great once you put more work into it and finish your flower placement and paths. i like how you've made things a real town would have and i see that you're already going creative with it.
small tip: add presents at the plaza to give the player a better and more interesting experience
sorry if i rambled on too much about your houses ;
I like your unique paths and how 3/4 of the player houses have a theme ( and stick to it )
Why isn't there a path to Williams house? The flowers look randomly placed to me, maybe it's what you were going for! Also my favorite rooms in Williams house is the entrance and basement. The kitchen looks great, but why is there a bed in the kitchen?
Overall I like your town and was glad to visit
First of all, I really LOVE how all of your rooms are themed and each one gives out a different vibe!! I also really like where the PWP's are placed, the town in general looks like its been given a lot of thought to, although the flowers are just scattered around, I don't know if that was what you were going for though!! I also like how you've made your villagers' houses look so nice and themed, overall I think you're town is succesfull and was lovely to visit but could still do with a little improvement with the placing of the flowers, but I am sure you are taking care of that!! Thank you!