REVIEW THE TOWN ABOVE YOU VIA DREAM ADDRESS

Its pretty simple...you visit the town above you via dream address, and give your opinions on what you think of the town, and what you think the person could add or remove. Also give a rating from 1-10, with ten being the best town ever and a 1 being a town that needs major work.

After you give your review of the town you visited, state your town name and dream address so the next person can visit and give a review.

I'll start:

Dream Address: 5800-5587-9403

Town: Rockstar

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i'll give this one more try

I liked your dream town, it's neat and the pattern of the trees is nice. Also liked Stitches's place.

Though in front of the campsite there were two cut down trees. I'd rate it 8/10.

DA: 5900-2460-0790
Town: Seiretoy

Right now, my DA isn't an accurate representation of my town, so the next poster is free to review AwePanda's town again.

Imma be writing down this review as I walk through the town by the way.

First thing I noticed was the use of the default tree pattern. Not bad per say, but not really fitting for a town pattern, y'know? Your paths are also 1x1 and don't use borders and that's just a personal pet peeve of mine, so don't take my disdain towards that personally~ Oh, and for the items on the ground, I'd recommend putting them in wrapping paper so it looks neater! You also don't need a golden axe there either since Lloid offers you an axe.

Okay, your path goes to 2x2, heck yeah. The purple compliments the fall colors well and the matching flowers are nice too~ I'd recommend some trees/bushes along the path as well to mix things up a bit~ There are also some sections that are a bit TOO full of this one single path. Like, the entire leadup to Retail and Town Hall. It just feels like there's an overabundance of this one path, so maybe toning down the usage of it around these ares would be helpful.

Going behind Retail, the wisteria trellis is in a bit of a nowhere land, and the police station is right in front of a bridge. Sadly the bridge is well placed and you can't move the police station, but I won't hold that against you since you couldn't move the station even if ya wanted to.

I like the bushes around the mossy stone PWP! I kind of wish they were more symmetrical, but you have a house plot right next to the PWP so I can forgive it not being totally symmetrical. Oh, the illuminated arch is a pretty PWP, but only when it's lit up. I'd recommend updating your DA at sometime after 6pm so the lights on it are lit up. The area with the fence, zen bench, and streetlamp is very cute as well. Maybe surround more bushes around that too? The campsite area is nice and tranquil as well, and I like how it's hidden behind all the trees~ I noticed near the train station you have one streetlamp on the right side of it, perhaps add that same streetlamp to the left side as well? Symmetry is key!

Okay, interior review time!
First room is really cute! I LOVE the Lovely Set, and the villager pictures being set up where they are looks pretty nice as well. You made the most out of this room and that takes a lot of effort. My only tripe was the golden closet thing. Doesn't really match the pastel pinks/whites in the room.
Left room: HECK YEAH A SWEETS ROOM! Seems a bit unfinished though, maybe try to get some orderable food to add into the room?
Middle room: Cute lil' kitchen~ It's really well-organized and easy to navigate and walk through! -takes inspo screencaps for my future kitche-
Right room: Oooh, a mermaid/aquarium type of room, I actually haven't seen that mix very often! It's a tad on the plain side, but it still looks comforting, aside from that Napoleonfish dear GOD that thing is creepy
Upstairs: A bathroom type of room, huh? This also feels a bit unfinished, but then again, it IS a bathroom/washroom... can't really do all that much with it. THANK YOU FOR THE SCREEN IN FRONT OF THE TOILET.
Basement: SHROOMS. 420. 420/10, I APPROVE.

Overall: The town feels a bit underdeveloped and there's a few placements on the outside that could use some touching up, same with the pathings. However, there is definitely potential in this little town of yours and I can tell you've tried pretty hard with what you've got so far, so congrats to you for it! I'd give you a solid 7/10, but with some touchups that number could very easily go up!

I'd never imagined someone would review my town like that but oh my god, thank you.


I understand your point of view and appreciate it, the way you explained things was very professional. xD

Although I should have noted that my dream town is different from my current town haha.

lets keep these going...

Okay, going through Collet.
I like the Sweets pattern for the path, but I don't think it goes great with the other path. I'd say pick a theme and run with it. Also, some of the paths are a little disjointed, at the connection to the plaza, as well as under the wisteria trellis, easy fixes, just need to be done.
I really like all the pink lilies, but where are your trees?
You have plenty of room to decorate your houses, that'll be fun to decorate when you get there. Oh wait. More houses. Aki's house needs some more cohesion, you have furniture in rooms where they don't belong, you're kinda busting Lyle's chops. Bang.

All those hybrids on the beach though, beautiful. Like a dream, oh wait.
You have a good start, but a lot of work to do in landscaping and decorating, as much of your town is kind of bare.

To the person who reviews my dream, I just updated so it's current, but I'm trying to regrow grass, so there are quite a few more flowers than usual. My address is 5800-5738-6242.

Dinoland is a cute town. I love the fairy tale path, too bad the bordered version of it takes so many slots. I don't mind all the flowers, one of my towns ended up like that, but you do need a more organized landscape. The campground seems a little awkwardly placed maybe a hammock or fire pit next to it would make it look better in its location.

Robyn's house is still a work in progress, but Jessica's house is very pretty. I love the front room. It feels like such a tranquil living room. My only complaints would be the modern wood bench in the kitchen feels out of place. I think the table would look better with it removed and the two alpine chairs on the left shifted to that side. And the upstairs room needs a more clearly defined theme.

I'd rate it a 7/10.

If someone wants to review NewVegas. Dream Address: 4100-5686-5105

I'll review NewVegas! I'm just gonna type up reactions as I go!

Starting off, I like the choice of the double rainbow and the path around the tree. But then I step down and... a cemetery? I'm a bit confused on the town concept, but hopefully I'll figure that out as I go along!

Jenny tells me "war never changes" as I go into her home. I like the path leading up to it with the bushes. First room is interesting! Casino type room, and then I see the Fallout poster in the background and remember the town name. I wonder if this town is just an elaborate Fallout reference I'm not going to get because I didn't play that game. That being said, the interiors are generally good. My favorite is the room in the back with the Gracie set. I wouldn't have thought to use the Gracie set that way! I love the basement, too, it feels eerie and interesting.

Now I'm starting to get the theme a little better, yeah it looks like a barren desert. It feels really off though when the town music is so happy.

You get points for using a lot of PWPs that aren't often used, though! It's refreshing to see a lot of those. You definitely get points for creativity. I also think the PWPs are generally placed well, I can't think of anything I would move. I just feel unfortunately the town is a big reference that goes over my head and will be better appreciated by a fan of the game.

Also incredibly minor but Jeffrey has a typo in his message!

Overall, though, your town is very creative and well thought out! I'm really impressed with the uniqueness of the theme! Well done!

My DA is 4400-5838-5587

From start to finish, Prru is a beautiful town. All the tiles look fantastic, and the flowers color-complement them very nicely. I love that your river patterns are actually complete and don't just awkwardly cut off somewhere (except for the one around town hall, but at first glance it looked fine too).

The early evening timing casts a calm blue glow on everything and it looks great with the predominately white and pink flowers. Your tiles look like they have the remnants of falling cherry blossoms on them; I have a feeling this town would look even better during the cherry blossom season.

One of my favorite spots in town was how you had the fire pit and the special stumps near the campsite. It's something I rarely see, and yet I'm surprised more towns don't do it. If I didn't put my campsite in a dumb spot I'd have loved to do the same thing.

I loved having all the presents around town, and not just piled up near the plaza so you just gradually come across them instead. I wasn't sure what the point of all the random gyroids on the bridges was, though. I did find myself wishing for a third bridge (especially going from Cocoa's house to Leppi's) at times, but most of the town is immaculately put together.

Bonnie's cafe room is really cute. I'm loving the custom regal furniture more and more, and K.K. Disco is a favorite of mine. Cocoa's main room is a great mix of modern wood, cabin, and alpine furniture. I'm not sure which of Leppi's rooms I liked best; either the left or the right, both of which have the same calming feel as the rest of the town. I also liked her gaming basement, although I feel like something with the cityscape wall would probably look best on the second floor.

I loved every second I spent in Prru. It's a beautiful town, and thanks for sharing it.

Thank you so much for this feedback!! It was really well thought out, thank you!

mrgameandscoth would be next...any takers to review the dream address?

I restarted my town a few weeks ago, and would like to get a review from someone please. I would like some suggestions...

Thanks

Town name: Aerobay
Character name: Raptor

Anyone up to review my town?

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Since mrgameandscotch was next I'm doing his first!
First thing I see is the tetris block like pattern around the plaza adorable! The little map was very clever too I commend you for that pixel work! The lego path was a cute pattern too but the patterns do seem a little mismatch! ovo
I liked that you had the 'lifes a party' cut out then had all these treats and drinks cleverly placed around! Including those chocolate coins by the well; like you could make a wish in the fountain. owo
oh my glossssh and the mini bamboo&bush maze, I'm a fan of mazes so that was awesome! But the random jig saw puzzle piece pattern felt a little outta place? I've seen a few different paths already and I'm one for color and combos but maybe instead put the tetris blocks or lego block one there so they kind of collide or go more together if that makes sense? owo
I also enjoyed how you tried to keep choosing PWP's that were also colorful, and then added little touches! Like the Picnic Blanket had 2 baskets of fruit like you were providing more snacks with what was in the basket!
I also liked the placement and images of the custom signs! And overall how the town was full of color and pop but you kept somethings a tad more coordinated! Like Kiefer's house since he had more a spooky theme he had dead trees near his house- again if that makes sense >v< I even enjoyed the little story you gave the town with the treasure hunt and wet suit.
I rate it a 9/10!

I'll rate kid kat79's DA and give my own dream address once I return from dinner in a few!

First thing I notice is the path, I love the pattern you choose not only is it well fitting it gave me a small sense of nostalgia. I ran into Flame about first thing he made me a bit curious but I liked the clothing of his, I thought it was clever how you did the Sloppy set for his home since as the early Pokemon show went over (excusing James family) Team Rocket grunt or not lived on the sloppy side so to speak. So clever! But not everyone may get that little reference! ovo Admittedly, I didn't pick up on Harley's theme or reference. The yellow bench good spot near the cafe with the cute tiny trees on either side! I did feel like the Resetti Center could have been in a better spot but I know you can't move that so don't worry about it!
I liked the little pattern you've made with the trees around the campsite but if those four do grow up all the way, it may make things a tiny bit crowded with all those trees so close as something to keep in mind! I also liked the peach trees on the bottom half as well as the light house! I don't seen many towns in general with a light house so that was a neat little surprise. I didn't get Raptor's theme or reference either. I liked how all three houses kept similar exterior however kinda like a sense of family or bond between them! owo And I know it wasn't that long ago til you restarted but so far good progress!
I rate it 6/10 and look forward to see what else you'll be doing!

Dream Address: 5900-2797-1011
Town: Rosewood

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Hmm. . . 7/10.

I'm not very eloquent, but I'll try to describe how I felt. . .

The benches gave me a very happy feeling every time I went past them! They're so pretty, especially with the flowers!

And I found what the green-haired player said very funny, even if the reference flew over my head.
But. . .

It all feels so. . .empty. I felt kind of disoriented by it, really. The paths were so huge, there wasn't much going on with the plant life in a few spots, and the houses felt kind of disorientingly "too perfect" as well.

I. . . hope I'm not being too harsh. Really, I've only been playing for about a month, and my town is kind of a mess right now.
Really, part of why I'm here is because I need help figuring out how to improve it. I prettied it up a bit for the Dream Address, but it's still very. . . here.

5100-6051-1707