Please critique my art

Money Hunter · Mar 5, 2015

I'm new to art and dis is my dump

Please give me criticism! When I ask friends and family they say that it's lovely through gritted teeth

Jas0n · Mar 5, 2015

There's not much point using guidelines if your guidelines aren't guiding you correctly.

Mega_Cabbage · Mar 5, 2015

That's not really a lot to go by, but I would suggest making the neck thicker. The hair should also flow/fall more naturally. What you have now is hair that flows in one direction and the bangs are separated at equal widths, which rarely happens in real life. You could also work on facial proportion and detail.

Money Hunter · Mar 5, 2015

Jas0n said:
There's not much point using guidelines if your guidelines aren't guiding you correctly.

my primitive brain don't understand...
i think its because i work at art from an angle i should stop doing that

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Mega_Cabbage said:
That's not really a lot to go by, but I would suggest making the neck thicker. The hair should also flow/fall more naturally. What you have now is hair that flows in one direction and the bangs are separated at equal widths, which rarely happens in real life. You could also work on facial proportion and detail.

alrighty thanks much ill do some more now

Finnian · Mar 5, 2015

Choose a hairline (where the hair grows from I guess)
Line the eyes up with the guildlines, the middle one.
Leave room for teeth??
Lol Idk.

Money Hunter · Mar 5, 2015

Finnian said:
Choose a hairline (where the hair grows from I guess)
Line the eyes up with the guildlines, the middle one.
Leave room for teeth??
Lol Idk.

Thank you so much the pictures are really helpful c:

Money Hunter · Mar 10, 2015

DUMP:

Critisism will be greatly appreciated

Please critique my art

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100% Bad luck always.

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